Eddy English: 2010

Thứ Hai, 13 tháng 12, 2010

Eddy
Period 6/Period 1
Mr. Patrick/Mr. Blake

Expository Essay
A country without freedom and has negative effects with the citizen is a place where a lot of unhappy things happen. In a command economy, negative situation happen because the government takes away the citizen freedom and life. A command economy is the second most used economy in countries that are wealthy and powerful, they can provide you other things like allow you to trade and make money by the government way but this economy has negative effect on the citizen by taking their freedom to live.
A command economy is harsh and makes it very difficult for the people to live. This economy focuses on the government controlling its citizen like they’re slave. China is a good example to talk about command economy. Every action or decision is led by the government. For example, China has a huge population so the government only allowed each family to have one child but this lead to the situation where family kills their own child, because sometimes it’s a girl and they want a boy to carry on their family name. You could see that command economies affect the citizen. This could tell us that command economy is a big problem to China right now. Families have to kill their child even if they don’t want.
Some stories can be related to this economy, for example the story “The Wise Old Woman”. It’s about a young lord who makes old people go to the mountain and left them to die because he thinks they are useless. As a result command economies can make you disappear with words from the government. The government’s decision can negatively affect you for example in the Tianmen Square of China, a group of student and other peoples say that the peoples can decide which government they want. However the government doesn’t allow this so they send an army to arrest these groups and they have the order to kill if anyone wants to resist. The result is thousands of people die either by gun or being crushed by tanks.
The command economies affect on China is even more than we imagine. Products like foods, clothes, furniture, goods and services…etc are create from factories but in a command economies the factories have to create whatever the government allow them to create. For example, if the government tells a factory to create one television and you want to create more to make a fortune out of it but you still have to create only one because you don’t want to get punish by the government. Another example is a factory is creating food for the people but the government tells you to stop and create clothes. The peoples have many times started revolutions to force the government to change economies many times. However, the government had made an example for the citizen by killing anyone who went against their economy like the Tianmen Square. But each times the people start a revolution so sooner or later more revolution will occur because they have learned from examples of other peoples stand up against the government ways of controlling China.
As a result, command economies can affect it citizen very badly like the example about child birth, the Tianmen Square and order people to die. Country that have this economy will be suffering a lot from there because of the government cruel way of controlling it country . However, countries that have a command economy are trying to move toward a market economy.

Thứ Năm, 25 tháng 11, 2010

Eddy
P.6/LANGUAGE ART
Mr. Patrick

RESPONSE TO LITERATURE
“We interrupt this program to bring you the RTL shows staring with our MC Eddy (music) It is the RTL shows, Is everyone favorite shows shows, It is the RTL shows”. Eddy says “Hello everybody, my name is Eddy and welcomes to the most populate shows in the whole wide world, the RTL shows. Today, we have a special we guess that comes from Spanish and writes the story “Gentlemen of Rio en Medio” let’s have a big welcome for Juan A A.Sedllo”.
Eddy stars with some few questions with the special guess “Hi, I ‘m Eddy, nice to meet you” Juan says the same thing “Hi and please to meet you to Eddy” Eddy says “Okay then, so Juan what give you the ideas to write this story?” Juan replies “I have these ideas when I was staring at my dad, dress up at an elegant man then he went to a company and he was holding a contract about sold some land.” “That was a good idea about taking your real life into a story so can you tell more about this story” “Sure, this story is about a gentleman name Don Alsemo who lives in a small town and didn’t negotiate with an American business guy about selling the village tree because that doesn’t belong to him so in my opinion that this book is very good for the people who are doing business and they have to think before they make a agreement or a deal, I will tell you more in a the theme of this story” Juan finish his word then Eddy remember “Talk about theme, is this the reason why you were here?” Juan “Oh yeah, I almost forget, thanks for reminding me Eddy. Okay, theme of this story is what I just say but to help some of the reader who are reading this story, you could look at the sentence where it says “The tree in that orchard are not mind señor, they belong to the children of the village” so this sentence five us a clue that Don Alsemo has already think about the negotiation before he makes his decision that he only sells what is his not the things belong to the village” Eddy says “That’s a really good message through the book, it not only tell us that we have to think before we act, it also tell that what we own is what we have like don’t just make a deal that I’m going to sell that land even though it’s not mind so that’s a really good message. Besides this sentence, do you have another that helps us predict the theme?” Juan reply “Of course it has, please look at the sentence that says “The children of the village are happy and playing with the trees” that gives us an idea that Don Alsemo is already knows that this tree is part of the village and he can’t sell it for two reason. One is the tree is not belong to his and second is the tree is making the village more happy, without it the village would just being sad and don’t feel like to live here anymore, of course they can grow another tree but would take a lot of time to grow.”
Eddy says “Well thank you very much for your literature about the theme of this book. So then we will see you next time on RTL shows, our next guess will be another famous author so see you next time.”